Tuesday, September 15, 2009

About my first essay

     I have to say i do feel accomplished to have finally finished my final draft.  The biggest challenge i faced throughout wrinting my essay was trying to incorperate detail.  I'm not much for alot of detail when I'm writing.  I'm just ready to finish so I tend to write as simple as possible without actually meaning to. But, I forced myself to really spend more time on this essay and I think i have enough detail.

     As far as the comments from my peers, I appreciated the constructive criticism that was given to me.  It helped me alot.  Also, I think the fact that I know someone other than me and Aiken would be reading my essay made me work harder on it.  Also, in reading and commenting other's essays, I felt more at ease about the mistakes I was making because I was not the only person making the same mistakes. 

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